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Saturday 16 July 2011

Process Essay (Yong Ming ) 16451

Nowadays there is getting more and more people addicted to internet , they used to have their life in virtual world . In real life , they become more and more quiet and try to eliminate their own with others . This might cause them forgot how to communicate with other . They enjoy those virtual stuff that have in internet and form a new community in the virtual world . Before this , I have to be like them , now I get rid of this problem . So , I know what should do if you want to stay away from virtual world and join into reality .

The first step we should do is to decrease the time we connect with virtual world . Once we addicted to those stuff , we will enjoy ourselves with internet and never realize that the time is keep on running . This cause us to spent a lot of time in virtual world with doing useless thing . If success to do so , you will realize that your time table will not so tight and will have some extra time to do your school work and group work .

Second , its better to have some friend than being alone . When you stay alone , sometimes you will feel lonely and start to think of many nonsense . If keep on thinking , you will think a lot of negative things and will depress your own . Once you have some friend there to be with you , you will feel better with them because there is always have a joker in one group . Maybe you will be the joker of that group or others will be , who knows ?

Also , you should join some club or society to fill up your extra time . Activity like sports , play music instruments , debate or yoga can relax your mind and also will lead you to a healthy life style if compare to sit in front a computer for the whole day . Besides that , you also can learn something useful once you join those club and society . You will learn how to manage your time table , train your critical thinking and also will find out that teamwork is important for almost all activity .

In the nutshell , we just have to take three simple steps to change our life that live in virtual world to reality world . Starting from now , do a little bit changes everyday , in the end you will find out that you changed and happy with your life .

1 comments:

azam said...

Yong Ming,
Thanks for the essay. A few structure problems but meanings, on the whole, come through. Good points given and topic sentences written clear. Keep posting...AZAM

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